Last Day of Classes!

I.    Feedback for Final Project feedback
II.   Peer Review
III. Course Overview
IV. Closing remarks
V.  Class photo

As you leave my class today, I'd like to share this old Irish blessing with you...

“May the road rise up to meet you, may the wind be ever at your back. May the sun shine warm upon your face and the rain fall softly on your fields. And until we meet again, May God hold you in the hollow of his hand.”

Final Project (5)

Objectives
Students will be able to
a. review what constitutes a formal, business tone of writing.
b. review the skills and strategies used for writing concisely.
c. scan the sample memo for formality of voice and make revisions.
d. write a paragraph reflecting on the sample's formality of tone for their final paper.

I. Formal Style of Writing
a) Take a few minutes to go over the sample essay focusing on language use.
    Do you think the essay is written in formal language?, informal language? Can you give examples?
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Exercise

II. Business Tone
In writing, maintaining the appropriate business tone is even more important than in speaking, since you don't see your interlocutor's reaction, facial expression, etc. Therefore misunderstands are likely to occur.
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Exercise

III. Writing workshop
a) Write a short paragraph discussing the importance of using a formal tone when writing academic and business documents.
b) After examining the sample essay, write a paragraph describing the tone used (give examples). Provide suggestions for improvement if necessary.


Final Project Research - Informative talk by Jin Kim

Sources:
Joukova, E. (2012). Lesson: Analysis 4: Language and Style. Retrieved from ESL 505 TA Resources.

Final Project (4)

Today we will continue writing the paragraphs about Thesis Statement.

We will also turn our attention to Language Use.