Peer Review Workshop and Memo Writing

Objectives:
students will be able to
a) peer review and offer feedback on the second drafts of their diagnostic essays.
b) identify the structure and requirements of memo
c) identify different types and purposes of memo

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I. Peer Review [40 min]
1. First, read the essay entirely to have a general idea of its content.
2. Second, use the Peer Review Handout and go over the different points listed.

II. Writing a Memo
PPP

Writing Workshop: Integrating Source Material into my Essay Text

Objectives
Students will be able to
a. listen to and discuss a presentation on Searching for a Job: Preparing for Oral Interviews.
b. prepare paraphrases, summaries, and quotations from the chosen sources and incorporate them in the text of the diagnostic essay.

I. Mini-Presentation:  Searching for a Job:  Preparing for Oral Interviews

II. Writing Workshop

Our goal today:  To finish the second draft of the diagnostic test.

a. Check your essay for points you are making (introduction (hook, background info), thesis statement) and body paragraphs (supporting points presented in each of the paragraphs).
You may write a rough outline to guide you.

b. By this time you should have read your two articles thoroughly; if you haven't yet,  start by doing that.
If you have, go ahead and look for information you can use as evidence to support your points in the essay.

c. Make sure you have all three types of citations (paraphrase, summary, quotation). If you need a fourth, fifth, or more citations, try to use paraphrases as much as possible.

Homework:
Finish the second draft of your diagnostic test. Use double space and Times New Romans as your font, size 12.
Include a title page APA Style (another view) and a Reference Page at the end of the essay.
Please bring a hard copy (printed) of your finished second draft next Tuesday, Oct. 9, when will do Peer Reviewing.

Sources:
Hacker, D. and Fister, B. (2010). APA Style. Research and Documentation. hackerhandbooks.com. Retrieved from http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/resdoc5e/RES5e_ch09_s1-0002.html

The Purdue OnlineWriting Lab. APA Formatting and Style Guide. Retrieved from http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/560/01/

Citing Sources

Objectives: 
Students will be able to
a. Define plagiarism and become aware of the consequences of committing plagiarism intentionally or unintentionally.
b. Use summary, paraphrase, and quotation as means of citing sources properly.

1. Library Day Survey 

2. Avoiding Plagiarism 
What is Plagiarism?
What are the consequences of Plagiarism?
What is common knowledge?
What is cited? What is not?
Part 1
What are the three ways in which you can cite a source?
 Part 2

3. Summary, Paraphrase, Quotation
   Chart
Flowchart
Paraphrase
PPP1
Video
Video 2
Summary
Quote

4. The APA Style

Homework: Here is the next step in the writing process:

1. Use avoiding plagiarism strategies (paraphrase, quote and summary) to integrate your illustrations (PIE) into your body paragraphs.
2. Add Explanations (PIE) to your body paragraphs.

Sources:

Bulkes, N. (2012). Video: Avoiding Plagiarism, Part 1 and Part 2. UIUC ESL TA Resources. Retrieved from:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L6cYhpeDouE&feature=youtu.be

Faivre, S. (2012). Video on Paraphrase, Part 1 and Part 2. UIUC ESL TA Resources. Retrieved
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PAH2UA_GsA0

Purdue Online Writing Lab. Chart and Flowchart on Quoting, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing.

Library Day

Objectives:
Students will be able to
a) learn about different resources available at the UIUC Library.
b) find at least one source they can use for their essays.

I will see you all at 3:30 at ACES Library. Don't forget your information sheet (the grid you filled out last class).

Writing Effective Conclusions

Objectives:
Students will be able to
a) review writing body paragraphs.
b) identify different ways to write a conclusion.
c) revise the conclusion in their diagnostic test.

I. Review
   a. structure of a paragraph
   b. P.I.E. structure
   c. including opposing views and counterarguments

II. Writing an effective conclusion 
a. Reflect:
What is the purpose of a conclusion? What are some ways we can use to write a conclusion that is memorable?
b. PPP
c. Use this information to revise the conclusion in your diagnostic test.

III. Library Day
a. Remember our library day is next class,
Thursday Sept. 27 3:30-4:50 at the ACES Library
The Funk ACES Library is on Goodwin.
 Directions

b.  Think about what kind of information you need to find in the library. Your goal for library day is to have at least one source you can use for support of your claim in your diagnostic essay.
For example, "in body paragraph 1, I want a statistics or fact that tells how many companies advertise/present themselves as being socially responsible" or "in the the counter-argument paragraph, I want a quotation stating that companies who are socially responsible are more profitable".
c. Fill out the grid.
 Library day mission: Bring the evidence grid and find sources that can provide relevant pieces of evidence that you planned on the grid.

Writing Body Paragraphs (2)

Objectives
a)  review P.I.E
b)  revise body paragraphs (diagnostic test) for structure and P.I.E.
c)  recognize types of evidence used in argumentative writing.
d)  understand common problems (logical fallacies) with interpreting evidence.
e)  understand the purpose and importance of including a counter-argument.
f)  evaluate their own essays for use of evidence.
g)  incorporate a counter-argument into their own essays.

I. Review P.I.E.
Work on worksheet to identify: POINT, ILLUSTRATION, and EXPLANATION
key
samples

II. Revision of body paragraphs for paragraph structure and P.I.E.

III. Argumentative Writing
PPP
Worksheet (identify the types (and effectiveness) of evidence used in diagnostic essays.

Writing Body Paragraphs

Objectives
Students will be able to
a. review parts of an introduction.
b. identify the elements of P.I.E. structure.
c. evaluate a paragraph for its use of these elements.
d. revise their own body paragraphs for P.I.E.

I. Review
Parts of a Good Intro (handout)/ key
Thesis Statement: The Four Commandments for an Effective Thesis Statement
PPP

II. Writing Body Paragraphs
What are the parts of a paragraph?
 PPP
Argumentative Writing

Revise your diagnostic test for:

• number of paragraph the body of the essay contains (no less than three)
• good paragraph structure
• P.I.E. structure

Sources:

Defibaugh, S. (2012). Argumentative Writing (Power Point Presentation)

Image Parts of a Paragraph retrieved from:  http://www.flickriver.com/photos/vblibrary/6123923301/

Image Visualizing the Paragraph retrieved from El Camino College at http://www.elcamino.edu/faculty/bpeppard/english-b-textbook/Paragraph Development.html

Tschoop, J. and Ahmed, S. Essay Structure and Writing Introduction. Retrieved from http://esl505ta.blogspot.com/2012/06/day-4-essay-structure-thesis-statement.html?zx=1b6f334108a457c8

(handout adapted from: http://class.georgiasouthern.edu/writingc/handouts/thesisstatements.htm)